Monday, 18 August 2014

How Finn found Bran by Jozua V

Finn

 Finn was a big man, strong and brave. 
His long brown hair flowed down his back like melted chocolate.
He looked awesome when he waved his golden sword.
He was fearless.

 By Jozua V
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8 comments:

  1. Paremata Year 3 and 418 August 2014 at 19:57

    We like your awesome poem about Finn from Mona Williams.

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    1. Room 1018 August 2014 at 19:57

      That comment was from Room 10.

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  2. Mika.C19 August 2014 at 00:07

    Was that an unfinished story anyways nice character discription

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    1. Elijah21 August 2014 at 20:55

      Mika that was finshed because he's in my class.

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  3. Hayden19 August 2014 at 20:34

    Great character description Jozua I really like the simile His long brown hair flowed down his back like melted chocolate.
    I also like that you described that Finn was fearless :)
    From Hayden, Yr 7&8

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  4. Rodney (Dad)19 August 2014 at 23:53

    Was the Character Finn based on me? because I don't have the long brown hair and I ate the Chocolate.

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  5. Kirsty (Mum)19 August 2014 at 23:59

    A fantastic piece of descriptive writing Jozua. I can actually see Finn in my mind. Great job.

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  6. Anonymous20 August 2014 at 00:15

    I LIKED WHEN THE MAN NEVER LET GO

    GABRIELLE

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